What a wonderful poem Bill. Forgiveness is hard to ask for and even more difficult to do. Especially when things are a big mess. I like the rhyme scheme you have there. Very nice.

Oh wow, so brutally honest and I love that! Beautifully written with a wonderful flow, amazing poem!

Superb, Bill! We all are accountable for what we do, but accepting what comes is hard. It takes a strong person to do that, and from the beautific atistry of your poems I can guess that you are strong. Simply amazing!

Wow this is awesome your so goooooddddddd

love always
tabby

Another superb poem! Forgiveness is an important component in love (Of any kind), but so hard to obtain and give! A wonderfully written piece Bill :)

First one of yours i've read i think.. really impressive, i love the moral feel you have in your writing. Trust and forgiveness are (like everyone else has reminded you.. lol) essential parts of any relationship, closest to everyones hearts, you've portrayed this so emotionally and excellent. Well written dude :)

I gave it a 4.3. i would apreciate it if you would give me a comment or 2. but its up to you i don't want to waste your time. c ya.

This is a really good poem....i really like it check out my poems sometime if you have a chance...

You write so beautifully... your words have so much meaning... it hit me so deeply... I loved it... your a great writer... 5/5