The worst thing to do is lose confidence on yourself. Hang in there and have confidence, in time everything will be fine. Great poem. Very heartfelt. 5/5

You're very talented. Never give up writing. Looking forward to read more. :-)

Wow Hayle! I haven't spoke to you for ages! How are you girl?? You've definitely improved on your work! I love this piece! Amazing! 5/5 Hey, how you've been? I hope this poem ain't true because its very sad...:( If you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here for you always girl! I haven't spoke with you for ages, how are you?! How's things?! I hope everything's alright girl. Don't loose confidence, stay strong, remember that all happens for a reason and that God loves you! I hope Jake's doing alright! I want to see a recent picture about him! Haven't seen you for so long! Girl, I'm always here for you, you have my hand to hold on! I hope to talk to you very soon! I miss you! Hope to see you soon! Love, Hug... =) Amazing poem! 5/5!

DarkPrincess
~Marielys~

Don't give up writing. When we write poems it is us expressing our pain and that is a hard thing to do. Let it out by continue using your talent in writing. It is such a depressing time and you don't want to always see tomorrow because depression always seems to win, but I hope that you can find that special someone that you can go to and talk because I don't want you to feel alone. Hang in there.
Paula

That was really good, i know ive felt like that before and the way you expressed your feelings was so real and yeah i really liked it well done
xxALLYxx

Very good 5/5~

That was good hayley...well done! keep ur chin up girl everything gets better... no matter how badly u fall... keep writing x

Wow, thats really powerful. ive been there quite a few times, it seems to be a place u can never really get rid of. but there is also an up for every down, really love the poem

@...wow, and you wanted to give up poetry???How could u with such a talent!!!...this is a great poem!!!...@