Great poem ... 5/5!

Hmm.. Well you writing is definitely different. I can say it had matured and that you are writing really well. Pure emotion and heart in these poems. Even if the emotion is anger, hate and sadness, it makes a good write.

Lost for always? sorry... just wanted to check i got the translation right.

I like this peice, it is very well written with some very well conveyed and presented content. the form is good and the flow very smooth making it easy to read and holding the reader well. the expression is fairly powerful making it a strong peice of writting which draws in the reader well and holdss them throughout.

5/5

Excellent write...very powerful...good choice of words..n perfect structure..liked the style u used
Great work on this one
5/5
xxPoojaxx

One word beautiful. I loved how you used a different language in a line throughout this poem it definitly gave this something more. Really powerful such strong emotions were portrayed. Well done on this~mel

Perso Per Sempre
Perso per Sempre

I wanna know what it means. the poem is beautiful dear. I like your wordings. 5/5

You are a very good writer but you need to break away from the song lyrics thing. It takes away from what you write.