Kind dark and sneak lol maybe that just me nice poem as always i like it i like the plot haha glad is not true tho keep it up5.5

Hey! great rite! the story's good too...this is awesome work becoz i usually think its harder to ryt a poem when you're trying to tell a full story...i dunno..thats what i think...n therefore...5/5 ...n keep writing!! its gd it aint tru though! ;)
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Waow! another great write!
not true but equally meaningful..luv it!
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