The Nature

by Jimmy Jr.   Feb 17, 2006


As i look i see the breeze
Caress the leaves from the trees
And carry them to all around
Gently laid upon the ground
I see the birds so high alone
Their song sing of your sweet love
And laid upon Their soft sweet wing
Your love to me they gently bring
And as they start their graceful descent
Delivering a message that heavens sent
One thing I know and will hold so dear
When i feel the need to I will feel you near
When a pasture calls my heart
I will feel that natures needs to take its part.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Well, I will give this a rating of 4 because I really liked it. I think
    this part was very good:
    And as they start their graceful descent
    Delivering a message that heavens sent

    and you did a good job on the beginning. I mean you started your
    poem with describing the things around
    you and this makes the reader imagine
    things better. keep it up.
    have a good day,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by lita

    That was good and keep it up . Thanks for adding that comment on my poem!

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