So passionately written... So deep and meaningful... So truthful!! A great insight... You truly have remarkable talent Steven!

The 3rd and 4th verse was my favourites! Great write Steve!!

Wow, this poem really makes you think! Very nicely written, excellent poem!

Steven,
that was a great poem ^_^ I love it my friend, been missing ya lots... hugs.

Great job. :] Keep it up & take care. 5/5.

"in the final
picture of time we will only have
been a small chapter in the grand scheme."

You've captured the essence of our future so beautifully in these lines, Steve. Very thought provoking read.

great as usual

good luck and peace
shobhana

Steven , I must say the 2nd last stanza is definately the eye catcher .

Filled with so much meaning and truth that some do not take seriously or simply choose to ignore .

I need not tell you how amazing your poetry is for your words speak for themselves.
Truthfully written , wonderfully expressed Steven .