Melissa, I love your poetry. But, for shear beauty, technical purity and power of emotion, this is it! I have watched your poetry grow these past months and you have found your voice as a writer and it is a blessing to read each new poem of yours. Great job!

Well done! Loved this poem, beautifully written. I'm impressed, you are so dam talented haha =)

Lotssaaa love -xxx-

Beautifully done, m' dear.

Wonderful write!! So deep and concise... Truly remarkable piece!

Oof get you with your technical terms `rictameter` sounded to me like the ricta scale you use to measure earthquakes lol
well hey i learnt something new =]
this is such great writing
i can imagine it all clearly
superx.

Awsome stuff,it's near perfect,i just love it

peace

Nice poem.

As I read this I thought of the song Shimmer by Fuel.
Brilliantly written. Your beautiful words made this piece come to life.
Take care and keep it up~Holly