OMG this is really good......5/5

Keeep it up! :)

Mallori

Really good anfd well written peice

5/5

This is the kind of poem that leaves a shiver up my spine, dark to the core, but also a sign of it being well writing, beautiful job in the expressiveness of this poem. The words you wrote here are peracticly dripping with emotions. It is a sad tale of love, explaining how it kills you to love someone so much that you would do anything for them and they not understand that. This poem was funny, not in a laughter sort of way, but again in the creepy kind of way because this was a part of my life's story that you captured so very well. A boy I loved, did everything for, and yet he never knew what he really meant to me until after I almost died. A great poem.

-Tainted Mikochan

Oh that is a really sad poem. I feel for you and understand how you must be feeling. Keep your chin up :)

Can somewhat relate to this one, again well done.

Not as good as some of your other stuff...but wonderful all the same...lacks structure some what but there is a powerful message behind the words...

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