Comments : Remember me

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    This poem is so touching! i like it so much congrats on an amazing write. i loved this line..Remember me,
    when the wax slides down the stick,
    and you see reflections of yourself,
    looking into those of the ones you once loved.
    that is so creative and has so much thought put into it.. this whole poem is well thought out and has emotions flowing all through it. it is a very moving piece. i really enjoyed reading it. lost love has got to be one of the hardest things in life to go through but you just have to learn to keep on going. i truly admire this piece of work. :D take care, sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is touching, so very moving. Beautiful work, Grace.