THE PROMiSES i BROKE.

by NewAccount   Feb 17, 2006


YOU DiDNT TRUST ME BY MYSELF SO YOU MADE ME PROMiSE YOU,
A WHOLE LiST OF THiNGS THAT i JUST COULDN`T DO.
YOU STiLL THiNK i`LL CARVE THOSE PiCTURES iN MY SKiN,
WELL i THiNK THAT THiS iS A BATTLE THAT i JUST CAN`T WiN.

YOU TOLD ME NEXT TiME YOU DO :: WE`RE THROUGH,
i DiDN`T REALLY LiSTEN - THAT WAS SOMETHiNG YOU COULDN`T DO.
i LiKED TO PiCTURE THAT BLOODY KiSS,
THAT BLOODY KiSS UPON MY WRiST.

i KNEW iF i WANTED TO i COULD EASiLY HiDE iT ALL FROM YOU,
i THOUGHT ABOUT THE THiNGS i WOULD GO HOME && DO.
WHERE SHOULD i START? WHERE SHOULD i BEGiN?
iT SATiSFiED ME THiNKiNG ABOUT DOiNG \"iT\" AGAiN.

BUT i NEVER DiD HAVE THE COURAGE TO DO iT,
THAT iS UNTiL NOW WHiLE i SiT HERE WiTH THiS BLADE ON MY WRiST.
i DABATE QUiCKLY SHOULD i TELL YOU SHOULD i NOT?
BUT THESE THOUGHTS ARE FADiNG FAST AS MY BLOOD BEGiNS TO DROP.

©-][x][-L0VES-TRAGEDY-][x][

---THiS iS SHORT BUT iT TOOK ME A WHiLE SO PLEASE COMMENT && VOTE!

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