One, Two, Three
Says the almighty end
Almost there
Let's count to ten
((These ruined the poem..))

Other than that, I loved it. It was filled with a powerful message and very wonderfully written. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Ooo. I liked it. =P I thought the flow was excellent, and I love a good dark poem. The words and the creation of the whole poem was wonderful. Great work. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I like this poem coz it flows very smoothly! n think the title is great!

Very Very good. The rhyming was PERFECT! The flow and rhythm(sp?) was great! 5/5 amazing.

my fav stanza was
Splintering and shattering
We walked through the midst
Blessed with the knowledge
That we no longer exist

5/5.

Fabulous poet im very impressive keep up the good work girl! anyway thanks for the compliment of mine though there some correction will deep in my heart i truly appreciat it... dont worry i will care for the capitalization nextime.

god bless!

This was really well written. The flow was perfect, and just rolled off my tongue. The thought of this poem was really well thought up, and the title is just powerful itself. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I like this poem as well, very greatly written, keep it up

Cool poem, keep it up 5/5

The rhymes were good in this one, but they didn't flow very well. It seemed like I had to pause before I finished the lines. The contents of the poem were great though.

We walked through the midst

[If I'm not mistaken, shouln't "midst" actually be "Mist" ..I could be wrong.]

The poem was written nicely. With a steady flow, and your rhyme scheme worked well too. I'm not sure If I've gotten the correct meaning though. The ending was my favorite part. Keep it up.

Natalie``

Great poem
Close your eyes
As the world explodes
Lift the edges of your lips
Recite your final ode
I love this part.
i really liked it. nice work
shanik

I like your poems because your not afraid of using unfamilliar vocab and i love the unusuallness of this poem well done i really can say i liked reading it xxx alex xxx (2)

Wow.. this gave me chills! I love the way that you worded this. My favorite stanza was:
Splintering and shattering
We walked through the midst
Blessed with the knowledge
That we no longer exist
That one really stood out to me. Very nicely worded. The flow and rhythm of this held up really well and all in all the poem was absolutely amazing! Keep it up! You're a very talented writer! 5/5

Again, erica. this was awesome.so dark and chilling, really got to me inside. well done
xxxxxxx

The rhythm, flow, rhyme scheme, wording, imagery...everything was perfect, yet again.
I really never have anything bad to say about any of your work, I find it amazing.

*While we all rested
The sky fell behind
We carefully ignored
Our restless minds*

you start off with two awesome lines, and then you kinda kill the verse with two horrible forced lines.

*Splintering and shattering
We walked through the midst
Blessed with the knowledge
That we no longer exist*

nice stanza.
Well written poem. Nice way to end it.

Although, as i read it, i tried to delve into it but it seems confusing... is this a full-circle ending?
I ask that because it starts off where the world has already ended... and then it goes back and kills the world off again lmfao!?
Contradictory, just a tad.
Well written though.
Nice vocabulary you have!
5/5
~Stephen White
(yellowfeverlime)

"Splintering and shattering
We walked through the midst
Blessed with the knowledge
That we no longer exist"

I... *speechless*

Tonight, you have found a new, HUGE fan of your work... :]

The title is effecting and poem doesn't dissapoint you
Sorrowful and beatifully written
Well done

NICE READ!!! you did a good job very creative without throwing a wierd idea out in the open so good job

Splintering and shattering
We walked through the midst
Blessed with the knowledge
That we no longer exist
this was my favorite part. These lines say so much. I love this poem. the word choice was wonderful, and the imagery is vivid. Again you deserve 10 but I can only give 5/5