Sometimes love happens this way....beautifully written....

love Ann

You obviously can write about "love" Beautiful job! *tears*

PS. I'll e-mail you from time to time....never stop writing and I'll always remember you girl :) continue inspiring!

This sounds quiet bittersweet to me and it was really effective and has alot of impact, I really liked your choice of words cause they fit in well with the whole idea of the poem. I think I can relate to parts of what you're saying, so in a sense you have put my feelings and thoughts into words! Very nice piece, well done :)

Very nice metaphor... It not only shows the mental block between two people, but the icy, cold interaction between the two.
Perhaps these two can light the ice with their desire...
Anyways, I like this because it's not a typical love poem! Plus, the title is very attractive. :-)

Great poem did ya miss me?

I loved your poem and I am back hope to hear from you again