That Night

by danielle   Feb 18, 2006


Do you remember that night,
When we stood together outside.
Then everything went quiet,
And you looked into my eyes.

You asked me if i liked you,
I said in what way.
As more than a friend you said,
And then i looked away.

I took your hand in mine,
And glanced at the stars above.
I couldn't find the words to say,
That i was falling in love.

Do you remember that night,
When the cold wind blew.
And i kissed your lips,
That is when you knew.

You told me how you felt,
I said i felt the same.
But i don't want this to be,
Just another stupid game.

You said well be together always,
And you'll always treat me right.
You made all my dreams come true,
On that perfect night.

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  • 18 years ago

    by sandra young

    I couldn't stop reading , it was like a story book love. U did leave out one word tho in the third verse, other then that I really enjoyed the read!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Phoenix Never Dies

    Heh, I must admit, I'm quite jealous, I want a boy like that...

    I love it, it's so story-like but not boring.

    Great job.