Nicely done keep it high.

Poweful poetry
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amy

Very strong concepts and beautiful work here your poetry really does speak volumes

Well Done
Sondos

I think this would make a great song as well as a beautiful poem :) I wish I could tell you more than that, but you should already know what I think about your work

Keep writing...its awesome....

[lostlaureate- come find me]

This poem would make an awesome song! I liked it alot... In a few places your wording was a bit funny, but all around a nice write!

Wow this is a fantasyic poem i love it!!! it flows really well, and i like the topic cause i cn really relate, youve express this really well :D
xxALLYxx

Sole,i really like some of the poem you write,its the way you put ur feeling into words,its just flow as it is,i like this one alot ,cos recently i got the same thing like that,got somebody show me concern and care,soooo much,but in the end she just say we just a friend,i couldn't believe that,anyway,nice poem,take care (yuniardi)

Wow, this is amazing... i really love it, it flows perfectly and just, WOW.. great work!