Comments : 0 Disguise [Lyrics]

  • 14 years ago

    by Sagini Ok

    Nicely done keep it high.

  • 14 years ago

    by amelia

    Poweful poetry


  • 14 years ago

    by Sondos

    Very strong concepts and beautiful work here your poetry really does speak volumes

    Well Done

  • 14 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I think this would make a great song as well as a beautiful poem :) I wish I could tell you more than that, but you should already know what I think about your work

  • 14 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Keep writing...its awesome....

    [lostlaureate- come find me]

  • 14 years ago

    by Brigitte

    This poem would make an awesome song! I liked it alot... In a few places your wording was a bit funny, but all around a nice write!

  • 14 years ago

    by holly

    Wow this is a fantasyic poem i love it!!! it flows really well, and i like the topic cause i cn really relate, youve express this really well :D

  • 14 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    Sole,i really like some of the poem you write,its the way you put ur feeling into words,its just flow as it is,i like this one alot ,cos recently i got the same thing like that,got somebody show me concern and care,soooo much,but in the end she just say we just a friend,i couldn't believe that,anyway,nice poem,take care (yuniardi)

  • 14 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Wow, this is amazing... i really love it, it flows perfectly and just, WOW.. great work!