I'm sure some time soon you will find confort from such pain that is told in this poem!
be strong and keep on writing!

-Josiah
Volunteer Worker for FR&C

My friend just told me that she dont wanna be my friend and now every night i cry. It does hurt. expecially when you see them and you cant tlk 2 them and you have memories of all the crazy stuff yall did together

AWW, that' so sad but I know how you feel,I know how it feels to loose a best friend,I do not think the pain will every go away ,all the way.It does get easier though with time.Great job on the poem.
Tisha~

It's okay (4/5). It's idea is raw and just perfect for a poem. But the way you repeated things seemed a little to close together. It might flow better if you added some things inbetween repeated lines. Just a suggestion. Good job though ^_^

-Tony

I liked it, it didnt really have a rhyme scheme, but i like how it sounded. good job!