Comments : Thirty Years No More

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow this is really good... it flowed well and the ending just pulled it all together... i honestly liked it and its very original! keep it up! i am very impressed!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Wow an exellent poem! i love it! it flows beautifuly! well done!! the twist at the end was amazing. a great read!!

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Harry Bryant

    Very nicely done, with a surprise ending keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    Brilliant! I love the meaning here so much and such a fantastic ending(i'm running out of adjectives here)
    Well Done!

    All the Best

  • 18 years ago

    by see

    That nicely done sad tought.

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey please don't break cigarette in two...i cant see anyone disrespecting it..lol.lol

    another great poem indeed, hv to read ur other poems too and soon will do.

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    Omg, i thought you were talking about your wife or something... dang, you had me going... i love suspenseful poems. Hotness. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Fantastic poem, great job keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was a great poem sure did not expect the ending though! lol...I can understand it very well a mean addiction to give up. Great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    Wow awesome write very unexpected.