Comments : Girl with a golden heart

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    You did a pretty good job with this one.. but your vocab needs to be stretched.. if you need rhyming words go to this website... http://rhyme.poetry.com/
    lately ive used it on the poems i want to make rhyme and it works really well and is helpful! hope it works for you!!!
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    You did a pretty good job with this one.. but your vocab needs to be stretched.. if you need rhyming words go to this website... http://rhyme.poetry.com/
    lately ive used it on the poems i want to make rhyme and it works really well and is helpful! hope it works for you!!!
    amanda