Teehee that was good for a beginner... culd have sum more depth but itz pretty good

That's very good...keep up the good work it will come more natural after you have writen more!!

Aww its sooo cute

Very interesting i would like to say. It gives out a point though i mean the poem needed a little more power to it i mean hey your a beginner so don't worry about it. But i would have to say it gave out a point that it only takes 2 minutes to make something change your life or something to make that happen. You did an amazing job though i would have to say for a beginner. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Its good for a beginner...i think you need to change up ur format a bit...and then it would flow better..good job..JOc

WOW this is reli gwd for a beginner,ma first one was bad n yrs is lyk a pros lol...well yeh loved it...love dia mwaz xoxo

BABE DATS A GREAT POEM I REALLY LIKE IT...UR A AWESOME WRITER DON'T STOP