Thats really good...life is tough and i know what it's like to just want to give up ..I really think this poem is good

Wow im very into sad poetry and i definitly like this one its really depressing and that stuck out. hey i really liked it and i can't wait to read more!

I like your poem it's deep and it's how a lot of ppl feel..i feel like that a lot..great poem though
amanda

I like this one. But.. Maybe put them into stanza, It might make it easier to read. I noticed there wasn't many full stops, Or comma's. So yeah. But I did like it :P I loved the first line; "All around the world, People cry, People die."

Very true! 5/5 Keep it up

- Natalie x-x