You are like the King of the Seasons, my friend. The words you choose are just magical, this is an amazing poem, particularly the last stanza. Very few people can rhyme like that without sounding forced, and you did a pretty good job with that. Take care,
~Jaime

Great peice, unforced rhymes good flow and fantastic content.

5/5

I feel like I can see, hear, smell and taste spring after reading your poem.

I like this its sweet
very descriptive

Awww that was sooo good and descriptive!....can you please comment my new poem ME AND YOU...thanks!!! 5/5