Comments : The Dove

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    I really liked your poem take care sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    I loved this poem and thought it was beautifully written. I did have one question - did you mean "last" or "lost" in the first line? Lost works, but I get the feeling you meant last. Otherwise, I truly enjoyed. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Afraid of the Dark

    Wow loved this poem. . . I dont know why asactly but that last stanza caught my attention. . .

    Laura