Oh that was touching
u inspired me
loved it so much
keep it up
gd luck ;)

Wow! that was really great hun. i enjoyed reading it. i loved the emotion you put into it nice job.
Emma 5/5

Hey. Great poem. It was deep and i really felt what you were saying. It rhymed really well also.! Keep up the good work.
Bec xx

This is a good poem, i really enjoyed it. please comment back thanx

Good write, I like the first two lines of the last stanza.
One thing, in the third stanza the line should perhaps be
There's no such thing as an angel from above.

Beautiful yet sad poem. very touching. Good rhyme scheme and rhythm. The slight change in structure for the last stanza created a powerful ending. Only error i found was a typo in the thrid stanza, which i think should be "..as an angel from above..." otherwise it doesn't make sense.

great poem. keep writing.

xXx

.... .... Very good. Very heart breaking as well. But don't worry I'm not taking points off for that, lol. It's very well structured. There are a few places it just didn't flow right in my head. Try reading it aloud to yourself once. Or maybe I'm just going insane, which wouldn't be surprising lol. Overall, I liked it.

Good job,
Tony

Wonderful, you did an amazing job. So sad and full of emotion I absolutely LOVED it!!!
~~Sweetie

That was sad, I can relate very much to this, you did an excellent job choosing words to use, and I personlly think you're great
"Whats the point to keep fighting for life?
I'm on the edge of life or death
Everyday I'm living in strife
Only he can decide my last breath"
I loved that part excellent

This poem was amazing! i can definitely relate to it! It almost made me cry, & it would have if i wasnt trying to be strong..lol. but yeah this poem was beautifully written & i loved it! 5/5**

There are moments in all of our lives, when it seems like everything around us is falling appart. But no matter how dark the day, we must not give up. The last 2 months of my life have been so far the most painfull of my life, but I know, that someday things will get better. Keep your head up..
Good poem aswell...5/5