Aw that's so sad n i like it don't undertand why u wouldn'y want that on your wall!

I really liked your poem, very beautifully written although in this line:
"Why he gave up and leave?"
i think you mean:
"Why did he gave up and leave?"
just thought i'd tell you.. cause it sounds better like that..
your poem had a very great flow..
keep up the great work..
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

It s cool i like it i jjust lost someone 2 that