Comments : His Death 2-9-06

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    Aw that's so sad n i like it don't undertand why u wouldn'y want that on your wall!

  • 18 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    I really liked your poem, very beautifully written although in this line:
    "Why he gave up and leave?"
    i think you mean:
    "Why did he gave up and leave?"
    just thought i'd tell you.. cause it sounds better like that..
    your poem had a very great flow..
    keep up the great work..
    take care..
    luv,,
    haya 3gab =]

  • It s cool i like it i jjust lost someone 2 that