Very good!! Great rhythm and flow to it. Also short and sweet.

Ohhh this is so sad! =( i hope everythings okay hun. Well, this poem was incredible and the title was perfect for it! Keep up the amazing writing...xoxo

This poem is excellent!!!! i loved it, i feel inspired lol well done x

Hey awesome awesome imagery...i wish i cud do that so beautifully...
ive gotta study now...damn...lol take care bye bye

I love it! great imagery
5/5
-Issa-

That was such a touching poem..
i love your writing!

That's sad, but really good

Wow this poem is just amazing...its so sad *hugs*