Aiii mamiii diiz iz so zad.... Pero tu sabes que es lo mejor... bueno mejor no diigo nada, porque Tu sabes lo q' haces. Pero just to let u kno, I loved the poem, me encanto!!! Wow te guiillastes mamii!!!lol... Bueno, sabes que te dii un 5... so asta la tuya mii queriida. Sigue con tu Corazon Perdido... ya miismo lo encontraras... te lo prometo!!!!

::MELI::

-Corazon Prisionero

Some days i may think about you and
a tear may run down my face
I'll remember the love we shared
which nobody in the world can replace

='( Love that part... I'm sorry that things are over between you and this kid, but I promise that you are going to be okay hun. If you ever need to talk I am here. Keep up the excellent writing xoxo

Amazing poem and i hope things work out for you :)!

Great poem! I enjoyed reading it. Check out my poems if ya like. Keep it up!!

Wow!!! this reminds me of myself sooo much. i got cheated on also, it really hurts and feel your pain. but anyways awsome job!!!!!!loved it. 5/5

Wow It almost made me cry

Sad poem but i like how u write. it was a good poem

I can alomst relate to this poem. urgg its so true everything you said. lol, it kinda brought a tear to my eye

I like your poem it's really good

I love your poem! it's sooo awesome! and i know how hard it can be to say goodbye and i know how much it hurts

I really like this poem it is great i love how it just flows together 5/5

I say it was good
question:were u thinking about that like that happen to u it was very good

I loved it. its very well written and its sad... but cute. keep it up!!! n_n

WOW when i read ur poem it just really made me feel what u were feeling because i have been there too and i know how hard it is but u just need to pick ur head up and try to move on. But yeah it was a AWESOME poem and keep up the good work.
Amanda Jean Martin

I had to Re-login to comment on this beautiful piece!!! Its reli inpiring and beautifully written. I loved every stanza
u r inspiring!!!!
keep it up
Luv
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