Its good. it has strong emotion.

I absoultely love it darling i can relate to it so much.

Yea im sorry that she goes through this crap to, thanks but i really aren't a god writer. yer sweet to say so though. you are very talented girl. well keep up the good work. stay strong.

Great poem! I have a poem about suicide which you can check out and maybe comment *PLEASE* lol! Anyway, this poem is well writen with the rhyming and pattern. Its easy to read, each verse runs into another softly and smoothly which i love in a poem! A big Well done! Lots of love, Rosie XxX

This poem is great it might not be about you but people really feel this way I know I do I have thought about ending my pain that way

~BlondeSadness

I really liked it alot! It held alot of emotions and somethings I could relate to it! Vey nice work!!

Very sad, but still a great poem!! you may not think its very good but it is! by the way, i also wanted to say that your quotes are AMAZING!!i really love them! i cant wait to read more of your poems,so i put you in my favorites (i hope you dont mind, lol), 5/5!!

Really great poem.. u really express emotion of this person committin suicide really well.. and i really like this bit of the poem,

Softly I ask myself why he done this,
Softly I tell myself no one will answer.

aww... i know how that feels.. great poem!