Comments : BURDEN KEEPER

  • 18 years ago

    by Angel

    I relly like your poem!!I knoe how you feel.please come check out some of mine some time!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ryko

    Hey! I like this poem it actually reminds me of my poetry, we seem to have similar styles I think. one criticism, go fix that one word where it shows the A?? thingy put the ' back instead haha. thats about it, i really like it.