Short but powerful. Loved it. Nice written. Well done =) Lotsaa love -xxx-

Thats really a great poem!!!

Short, sweet, and amazing.

Wow tho this si too short but the words were so strong
gal u did a gr8 job
keep it up and thnx 4 the comment on my poem :)
much lov
N3mA xxxxxx

Amazing how such simple words can be so strong..Excellent job..I must say...hands down greatness..Thank you for that comment..and dont worry i wont be doing death..its just a thought i can control myself..Thank you so much thought it means a lot..Great poem once again
10/5
~Torn Pieces of my Heart~

Very good poem with alot of power behind it

Short and sweet just like you :)
Thanks for the comment :)
5/5
Take Care

I really like this poem. 5/5

Short, dark and beautiful.

Ummmm that was ahh lil sacry but good i guess