Hmmm...It's ok, I'll give you a 4.00

I really like this one. like it has alot of meaning to it and its very deep...great job!

I like it..deep and darkull..heep it up

I think its really good, and makes u wonder, well god bless and thanks for my message it ment alot. ur a good writer XXXXXXXXXX

Kool poem i give it a 5 :) thanks 4 the comment!

Yea this is cool hun 5/5 xxx

You need to change the title, that's all.
The rest of the poem was pretty good. Definitely had images to work with, so good stuff.

I liked it very much

I lyke thiz one its gud u can almost put your self there

~~JStuckie~~

Great imagery in the poem and i could really feel the emotion in it.i liked it xxALLYxx

It was a good poem!
it had alot of darkness in it as well, it was good! good imagination as well!
thanks for the comments on my poems!

Oh wow this is amazing. great imagery.
good job