Total and complete hotness. Can't say anything else but that! Keep up the good work, you're an awesome writer!

I understand were ur coming from good poem i love the wording in ur last line xox sam

Good job love. nicely written. it was passionate and happy, but at the same time it seemed quite sad and lonely. well good work once again!

Brad

P.S. thanks for commenting on my poem 'A fight within'

KUDOS BABE THANKS FOR THE COMMENT I LOVE THIS POEM IT IS WRITTEN PERFECTLY ALOT OF PEOPLE CAN RELATE!

This is really beautiful! might sound great as a song!

love and peace
shobhana

Vwey nicely done, enjoyed the flow, superb job!!!