^^ I'm with Sunny on this one... A tremendous write :)

Wow, Steven! This is awesome, so beautifully written! I love it, great job!

Remarkable use of expressions and true poetic prowess!

great one once again, Steve!

shobhana

Resplendent poem Steven, wonderfully penned, superb piece!!!

This poem is filled with alot of depth...you're very talented darling, keep it up!

Great poem i love it out of 10 i give it a 20. lol. nice work. keep it up.
sandy