Comments : If

  • 18 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    I hope you guys can understand this poem

    thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl g0od j0b 0n this p0em. thank u f0r ur c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t

    lOve frOm
    d0ra

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Truthful poem, and thought provoking. A tad short though. In the third couplet I think it should be "don't they."
    I liked the last two couplets especially.
    Good poem.