Good Job, It's excellent

Good poem, I can relate, and it brings back some very sad memories, your a good writer, keep up the good work. 5/5

Very well writen peice

5/5

Great!

Great!

I think this was a really great poem. I like the way you chose your words and set the poem out. Keep it up :)

Hmm. Sad poem. I like it though, you're a very talented writer, keep up the work.