Wow! This is am inredible poem. The flow is so amazing it just slid from one sentence to another. You have some very inciteful comments about life and a great message, one I haven't read before. A very wonderful poem I was impressed. 5/5

-Tainted Mikochan

Wow.. this is reli gud.. i reli lykd it.. i cant believe ur only 14.. i just turned 15, and i write nowhere next to urz.. ur reli talented..
keep it up
take care
NannO

Wow... Nicely done! Love it! Keep writing... you definitely have talent. 5/5

This poem is really good. i loved it. 5/5**

I like the way you have written this poem. keep up the excellent work

Awesome job, wonderful deep concepts. keep it up

This poem is really deep.. and extremely creative.. i liked it alot

~David

Again, i loved it. you are a great poet. keep it up

I'm not really sure what your trying to say in this poem, the last two paragraphs kind of lost me, but i have to say the ones that i understood were good, you have a way with words, but i still wish i could of understood all of it.

Sondos you have such a talent!!! I loved this poem, I'm so glad you joined CC&P and that we're doing a collab together! Whee! Awesome poem!

Seeing as most others began their comments with Wow! Then I don't see why I shouldn't :)

Wow!

'If I were to kill the demon would it not still be murder?
If I were to seduce the temptress, rape?'

Theyre amazing lines - though the entire poem is great :) Keep it up

Peace. [Sole]