Actually Ella its really good...great job girly....Love Ya Tons...Joc

OH BABY...YOU KNOW IT!!!!!!!♥♥♥♥

Hey this is really good and thanx for the comment.
-sheena

Well first of all that is a good poem! It saddens me:(..but good!

Second..WELCOME to the bestest club...
*drum roll*
FISH BOWL
If i can help in any way, feel free to contact the assistants (of which i am one) and our amazing leader Pure Silence.
Make yourself at home.:P
xoxo

Although you haven't been writing for very long... because you really do write well. i cant even imagine your poetry in a few months... looking forward to reading more :D welcome to the club! hope you enjoy it!
-xXx-

Are you kidding, it's an awesome poem!! Your a good writer for having never use to write before ( I read ur profile )
5/5
Jen

WOW this is awesome...it really moved me...x x x