Wow.. this poem is amazing...I love it... great write..5/5... I have a question tho... in this line "While she cried herself to deep" shouldn't the word deep be sleep? okay well anywayz.. great write...

Wow.. how come this of all poems is not on the top? This is truly amazing. I just love it. You explain how one of my friend feels almost to a t. That was truly a brilliant piece of work and definately deserves special mention. Congratulations.

Awww dee dee that was really good. I care for you and you are pretty don't think yourself of a beast -hugs-

Love ya
Kala

Awww dee dee that was really good. I care for you and you are pretty don't think yourself of a beast -hugs-

Love ya
Kala

I really liked this poem and how well it flows. 5/5 from me

--josh

Told You this poem was good 6/5

Dang dee, i don't beleive i aint comment on this earlier, it was real good though. Hope you get past all that beast stuff though. I'm just rambling on about nothing so i will get at you later. - Yvette