You are like my angel from Heaven! I feel like u wrote this for me because this is exactly what I am feeling right now. I can't believe it!! I'm probably sounding really stupid but I'm in shock. Wonderful job and I'm not saying this just because I can relate! :)

Beautiful poem..wow it's as if i am u whilst reading that. I felt my heart aching.
i loved ur choice of vocab..it was subtle which i think enforced the pain that much more.
I hope one day you mount the courage to tell this person..seems like he/she means a lot to you..don't lose that or your oppurtunity.
Thank u so much for ur comments..they make me smile and feel worthwhile, as a poet at least:P
lots of love xoxo

Wow this is a really beautiful poem... I loved it!! Great job, I hope u keep writting like this, 5/5.

::MELI::

-Corazon Prisionero

Beautifully w0rded. a t0uching piece with em0ti0n. thank u heaps f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk. meant al0t t0 me

l0ve always d0ra

Great peom..so many fellings all in one! GREAT JOB!

LISSA

Great poem i loved it so much!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, this is really an amazing poem dear, right in my fav list u go with this one..lol

this is really an sweet poem
all the best and take care
5/5

Beautiful piece. it shows the feelings I feel... great job!

heidi