Comments : Crystal Silence

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    You've written some powerful pieces today!!! Very gut wrenching... Superb writing :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    I really like this one, you have a very unique way... I like that. Sad, yet so wonderful....Great poem, my favorite part of this poem:

    She walks in
    Crystal silence
    Feet broken and
    Bleeding, trudging
    Endlessly on a
    Journey from
    Yesterday to tomorrow...

  • 18 years ago

    by AinsleySara

    This is really good! Sometimes i fee this way and ya it jus remdsd me alot of me
    good job keep up the good work
    ainz!