Really really good! 5/5**

I really loved how you gave the objects in your poem so much life.

Gradually the trees begin a frown,
The winds, they turn wearing their crown.

I really liked that about your poem. 5/5 good job hunn*

I thought the flow of this poem was pretty cool and the rhyming was brillant, but I had a hard time getting your point of the poem. First you talk about the morning, then surpressing sorrow, ect, I just don't quite get it. Maybe sometime you could clarify for me just because it seems like a good piece of work and I want to give it the rating it deserves.

-Tainted Mikochan