Your poems are so good. I love them. The ones I have read so far have this really uniqueness to it. Good job.

You diction (word choose) and syntax (word usage,) was amazing here. You had some creatively crafted sentences and a strong rhyming power. These lines really hooked me:

"Fungus spreading through my veins
Like embalming fluid; eating my life away"

You have a unique style that really captivated me and made this poem as nice read.

-Tainted Mikochan

I look forward to seeing you be famous somday! (your profile) You have my dream job that I can't get b/c of family reasons and my station in life, but that is really cool, modeling, acting, singing, wow you go amaze the word!

-Tainted Mikochan