Neat poem.. good flow
5/5
love
amy

Well done *Forbiddeneyes*,

5 point added to this piece as it should be.

LM

I loved it, well done
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Great use of vocab, and overall a very well written peice. the final stanza is amazingly written and composed.

5/5

I love it. awesome job. i love this:

This emptiness inside
Pours my crystal tears
Secrets cannot hide
The fact I cannot heal

"Faded from long ago"...I love how you ended it. Perfecto. 5/5

Beautiful poem...Very good use of words..very nice flow..and a lot of emotion..great poem keep up the good work

5/5

So deep and so sad but so amazing at the same time i really liked it and i loved the fill of emotion

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

laura

Very good poem, I enjoyed it. Good writing - DM