"i always cry then forget why"
i love that!!! lots of feelings..rly good poem! well done, keep writing!
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I love this poem! It really kicks butt. It's awesome!!

-Kyleene

5/5 poem, great job done.

Some random lines strung together in a nice way that didn't totally mess with the rest of it. Not awesome but powerful nevertheless. It wasn't really something that I personally like but still it had a quality to it on the emotional level that was good.
~Faith

I agree with one of the comments here - there's something interesting about the way that the lines are cut off and run together. it makes the whole poem have a sort of churning, chaotic tone. which seems to be what you were going for. ; ) A couple spelling things, but i'm sure you could catch those when you edit. good job!

I really like it, i like the emotion in it the most, very heart-felt

Ya a realy good writer keep it up, i love all your poems
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