Hmmm provokes thought

Realizing the true value of life and death, right before your last breath

love that bit! xox

This was good but not my fortee. The mention of death and the afterlife, does intrest me. But not in verse.

Since you are new I will tell you this: When you write a poem and try and submit it to P&Q make sure you do it twice because in the long run your quotation marks and your apostrphes will become this "goodbyeâ?¦ so again do it twice.

This was a good poem. And needs some editing....