*hugs* This was well-written, full of emotion and pain. The ending is very powerful, its so sad to see people kill themselves because of a breakup. Its not worth it, there is someone better out there. Just remember, whoever made you write this is not worth your time and does not deserve you love. Take care XXXXX
JL

I love this one! its the best one you have writen! i read your new ones and there great! -eve

This is great!
i can almost feel your pain
i hope your ok now, and dont let the breakup get to you to much
xxxx

Wow!
Your an amazing poet.
I really adore your work,
can feel the emotion within them.
Keep writing,
you have a lot of talent.
Thanks,
Tim. x