Tip:u should ryhme da wordz..

Its good....i liked it.....

:) Nice.

Wow that was great I liked it, it seemed like a story but was good :)
and thank you so much for the lovely comments :) 5/5

This is good poem and I should have commented before. Lovely story and beautiful written. :P

I liked this poem, very well writen!! 5/5, I really liked the topic.