Ty 4 tryin to help but no its ok - im not being abused or anything - i wrote that poem because i hav friends that werent exactly abused but they were hit more often than they should (when really no one should b hit at all) but i wrote that poem for those ppl - i seem to find a way to put myself in their place withouth actually suffering wat they r and i write about it - but i really appreciate u trying to help - its nice to noe that theirs people out their who really care - thank you again!!! =)

Destiny

I really love the title of this piece.This is short but really says so much.The 'our heart' part seems a bit awkward or something-perhaps 'my heart' would make it flow smoother or be more in context?Perhaps not-just my opinion..This is a sweet and beautiful poem of love, I really like the emotion it conveys.Again, I am impressed with the brevity of it and how you worded it to say so much.Nice style.Good poem.