This is a very good poem. the subject isnt something that most poems are written about. its very original. i love the power of it and the way you make your emotions so clear. great job. 5/5

The imagery here is mind blowing as is the sheer power. You have immense talent
Well Done
Sondos

Thats so HOTT. i love it.

Awsome write 5/5 it's different, keep it up

Wow.. this is amazing!

This is good. Lovin' how you kept repeating "I'll always be alive" That was good. But overall, That was a great poem! 5/5 =]

natz x0x

This poem was really great. It reminds me of the racial tension that you find almost everywere you still go. and yet, it makes me sad, to know that people hate other people because their different, when in reality we're all the same

This poem is absolutely amazing. i loved it. ive never really read a poem about a racism issue, but you did it very well!

That stings! Such a lovely poem, and the lines, flow, rhythm, rhymes are really clear :)

Peace. [Sole]

A lovely defence of all humans
I loved it =]

Ooo thats awesome

I really enjoyed reading this. the flow the rhythm and everything was just excellent. the emotions were spoekn so easily, and i really like that about it.

Kat

This poem to me means to stay true to who you are and it stings that people have to judge others or lie often. I did think it could have gone more in depth to make the message a bit stronger but even without that it was a pretty good poem. Kind of repetivive with the "lies." but overall still decent.

A fantastic and strong poem, well done. The last stanza is perfect, the entire thing is empowering, a pleasure to read. x

Nice work, flows nicely and just good write!!!

Really excellent poem, I love the pride that shines through in this write, that no matter what people say or do you'll still be standing, really brave stuff. 5/5 definately. Fantastic, powerful, from the heart stuff x

I loved this one! Honestly. It was really well written! 5/5 again hun, Keep it up!!

`natalie xx

Wow.. a realy nice poem.. great work! 5/5

I absolutly LOVED this!

You did a really good job on this piece, And I love how you kept repeating 'I'm still alive'. The flow and rhyming were good. And the poem itself was brillant. From start to finish you kept my attention and made me want to keep reading. So 5/5 from me. It was just awesome!!

`taleee xx

Woww! this was amazing! it was very unique and flowed well! great job on this!