Loving you

by Toua Her   Mar 4, 2006


Loving you makes me feel so free. I feel like nothing can come between you and me.
Your smile, your looks, always feels me with joy.
When I'm with you, I know that you will always keep me being joy.
When your down, I'm down because your always happy.

(I'm not done yet... Sorry...)

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  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    It sounds sweet...
    too bad it's not done yet... :)

    "being joy" isn't quite correct... maybe "filled with joy"?

    "When your down, I'm down because your always happy"

    - i don't quite understand this last line... the part after "because", at least... do you mean she's always happy, so when she feels down, you do as well?

    - would like to know when it's finished... :)
    tell me something when you finish it, please...

    *isabel*

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