Short and sweet. That was a delicious bit of poetry there =D. Thank you very much for the comment. Its good to know that people do relate to some of it. Anywayz great write and i'm gonna check some more.

Awwe. this is an excellent poem as always. if its about who i think it is....i wonder about his intentions too...careful, girl!

Wow i really liked this one. i really liked the was you kept up the beat. keep it up!

This one is awesome! descriptive, emotive, and the meter is right on! 5/5

Its so sweet and simle.....lovely job

Bharti

The words fit together so perfectly..
:)

The words fit together so perfectly..
:)

The words fit together so perfectly..
:)

Such a wonderful poem. as always.
you are still one of my favorites and i think you seem like a really awesome person. : )

This is an awsome poem. I got your email but idk what happend i couldnt read it and it was all messed up so sorry. Do you have aol instant messanger>?

I really enjoyed this one. great job keep it up!