Ohhh THIS IS AN AWSOME POEM...I REALLY LIKE IT...its so sad but true...
Keep writing
~aga~

Wow I love this poem! It's brillaint.
Fantastic written...

The end is a bit open, a bit mysterious and weird, but it dares you to wonder beneath the surface. Which is awesome! I really loved it!

Well done =)

Lotsaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Ooh helL YEAH.. U got dat right. Women/girls aren't weak, lets be strong, and yes it's sad but can get over it and not push us down over them fools!